Monday, November 12, 2007

NOT Well Said! Response to "Why We Fight" from shirtless dude...

He's a tool...
Here's GhostCow's (LOL!) response to "Why We Fight".

"Writers Are Greedy"

A perfect example of "teh intarwebs are a privilege, not a right"!

This is the winning comment from GhostCow's video page!

I'm sorry, but your video is structurally weak. You need a good hook at the beginning, plus you need to clearly state your thesis. Your copy tends to meander and your points (ie "the average writer makes...") are not well supported. Plus, the piece is really lacking a solid conclusion.

I suggest you hire a better writer.

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